Ideas For Re-Doing My Photo Shoot

When re-doing my photo shoot I want my model's facial expression to look strong and to look directly into the camera.

Attempt On Front Cover Layout

Whilst experimenting with my front cover I used the grid, this helped me to line out the wording on my page and the masthead letters. So far at my attempt on my magazine cover I feel that it is to plain. also the photos that I took of my model was plain. I am going to retake my photo's and experiment with different locations for the background. I like the font that i have used for the writing, I also tried to keep the font the same through out the page.